Friday, 28 January 2011

Feedback 28.1.11

Well done team! You are making good progress here although I need to see work from all of you (Dimitris).
You need a reflection on the prelim task - what did you learn, what worked/didn't, what would you do differently if you did it again etc? One thing I noticed is that there should really have been a close up on the door handle before Bilaal opens the door. There is a lack of close ups and perhaps, as the conversation last a while, you could have moved in to a close up during the shot reverse shot. It's not a problem, the task is fine but you could add these thoughts to the reflection perhaps?
Please ensure you've all booked into workshops for next week. You can book other weeks in advance too if you want to make a specific night regular but you must remember to contact Mike if for any reason you cannot make the night you've booked. Please complete the research for Mon's lesson then you can start to plan more thoroughly.

Mrs A

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